Excellent poem, love the flow and the vocabulary
was great, very sad and heartfelt piece great job well done, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Oh dear, this is just so sad.......... but as always written greatly. i like your style and word choice, they made the poem for wonderful, as always a great poem that deserve nothing less than a perfect 5/5

Second stanza:
seemd= seemed

I really liked this one. Though it is sad. It had a great flow and wonderful word choice.
The images I got through reading this poem were strong and clear.I gave it a 5/5.

Oh my goodness, this is so sad, especially the end. some parts reminded me of me, and that's just scary, but i like poems i can relate to. great job again with the rhyming, wonderful word choice, and the flow was good.

Very well written. 5/5

RavEy

Wow. Once again! Amazing poem. Your a very good writer. Good choice in words and great rhyming. Keep it up!! 5/5

`-jackie.

Wow! thats was so beautiful yet so sad. you did a wonderful job. i love this. i would give it a 10 if i could! 5/5

xo kisses xo

Wow.. I don't know what else to say about it. This is very good. 5/5! Everything flowed together so well. Everything perfectly rhymed. I love it hun. It really brought a tear to my eye. Excellent job. =]

I thought this was very good.. Another great one from you!! Please keep up the awesome work.. 5/5

Hmm.. be careful with the spell-check and whatnot. Very emotional poem, obviously. I liked it. =] Good job!!