Once again you have written a great poem. The word choice was wonderful and the flow of coures was great. I liked how you wrote about missing someone faraway and couldn't wait to see if that person called. I know how that feels. I gave this poem a 5/5.

This was good, really it had a few grammer errors, but nothing major, the flow was flawless, and the word choice was excellent, the emtion was heartfelt, and strong, and the message was clear. 5/5

Awww that is sooo sweet and yet the truth from the heart, like when your waiting by the phone for that 1 call from that special person... and it never rings. Is there a store I can buy your books from or is it only over the net, I need to get a credit debit card so I can make online purchases. hmmm, I will look further into that, I love your poetry!.

Aww...this is so cute...it's so true too..atleast in my case..
It was so simple yet i really liked I mean..you've penned it so well in such a relateable manner..=)
Kp writing m'dear.
5/5

Regards,
Pooja

Wow this is nice, beautiful and alot of people can relate to it. Although my man is not so far away i still get so excited when i have a message from him when i wake up :)
Well written enjoyable read.
Keep it up :)

This was quite a beautiful poem with a sweet meaning portrayed behind it. I liked the flow it wasnt off at all. The style interesting as always. Your word choice was deep, powerful, strong, and stunning. I found this poem to be capturing coming straight from the heart. Well done on a perfectly penned heartfelt poem. ~mel

I love your topic. what a great idea to talk about the message system on this website.

5/5 David

Awww that's soo sweet goran! i know the feeling, i do the same thing. beautiful poem, it hits the heart yet again.

This is a contemporary poem with an old sentiment. I love your delightful cultural colloquial wording.

You should write more like this it is really good

That bright my dark room.
Do you mean
That [[brights]] my dark room?

Honestly?
I don't understand this poem.
It's quite... original.

I text message and all.
But it's kind of a waste of text
If someone just sends you a happy face.

I don't know.
Maybe I read it too slow or too quick
But...
I guess I'm not meant to understand th is.

:[
Still.
love your format.
I'll give you props on that.
5/5?

Okay.
I read it agian.
I'm kind of understanding it.
It's kind of like... a drug?
A cure?
That if she doesn't send you a message...
You won't get away from the sadness.
Or blah.

I'm quite familiar with the feeling of anticipation--
an anticipation for something to arrive without further ado. And text messages from a particular someone is no exception to the rule. =]

I really adore this piece. It was so delightful and pleasurable to read. I'm looking forward to read more of your works!

Take care,
Debbie

This is so true, most of the time i even open my computer with hope of email from her, that is at least what i want to have, when i open it...
as you said it is just a click.

I dont know how is it possible but i have missed 11 poems of yours, are u writing sooner or im slower?lol.
this was a good poem goran, but unfortunatily not for me.lol

I think its sooooooo adorable and really really sad dat it makes me cry....!

Hey this is kk and u have written a great poem and so this is time for me to go!!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent poem. :3 (5/5)

Heyy is this message thing.. do you mean text message? email? or like a game?

Keep up the writing, your poem was the greatest poem i so far read!!!!!!

I really like it.it reminds me of my boyfriend and i except we text.