Chels,

*tears* Honestly, I don't know what to say. That has got to be one of the most painful pieces of poetry that I've ever read from you..... Are you okay? :[ I'm worried...

"Mommy I miss you
daddy I miss you more
cant I have the parents
that i really do adore?"

^ I can tell you're hurting. If you need me, I'm here. :]] 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Thanks for the comment you left, I'm leaving you one too. Weird that we like to write about things that are similar. 5/5 by the way. I hope this isn't true, because if it is it would be really sad. If it is I am sorry. I will continue reading your stuff. :)

This poem was obviously full of emotion and very deep. I have never had to deal with this situation, though I do not get along with my parents. I only hope you continue writing and trying to get through to you mom. Don't give up.

The only critique is to watch your flow, just keep it steady and keep your heart in it. Beautiful piece. I loved it. 5/5.
<3Raych

I like this poem. very good. very full of emotion and it doesn't seem fair for u to have to grow up like that. but non the less its a nice poem i would say more but i forgot wat i was going to say sorry i post something different if i remember too.