You're The One

by BeautifulxMess   Jun 7, 2007


It's never easy to say good bye to the one you love.
Knowing that they could be with someone that's not you.
The pressure of taking them back feels way too much.
And letting go may seem like the right thing to do.

Happiness is found within the smiles we shared together.
Love burned inside the hearts that beat into our chest.
Faith was there through all the times the bad was better.
But no matter what happens, your love was always the best.

It hard to think that we may be over and done.
There's too much I want to tell you and find.
Just know that you may not think, but you are the one.
The one who made me listen to my heart and mind.

You still are the one that loves me though it all.
The one that will never leave me to cry.
You're my hero who catches me before I fall.
And you're the one who will never let me die.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    You're my hero who catches me before I fall.

    like one of my fave lines. :)
    yeee.
    c'est tres good, and i really like how you show that your love is so strong and that he loves you back.
    well done.
    i gave it a 5/5, for all the ♥ :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Your first stanza?
    It could be a good quote.
    It's... almost a fact.
    Lol.

    But no matter what happens, your love was always the best
    Love that line.

    Third stanza's kind of cheesy.

    You still are the one that loves me [[though]] it all
    Do you mean "through"?

    And you're the one who will never let me die.
    A bit over dramatic.

    All in all.
    Pretty good.
    Not the best I've read.
    But it's okay.
    5/5?

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    So beautifully written. I loved the flow and the love that you put into this poem. there was a grammer error though it was in your secong stanza and it was in the first line. Scared should be changed to shared. Other then that it was great! 5/5

    <UnToLd TrUtH>

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This is such an excellent poem filled with love and desire, the word choice is great and the flow as well. I know the pain of letting go of the one you love, it's hard but sometimes it's for the best. You'll be a stronnger person for it in the future. amazing write 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another greatly written emotional poem by my favorite poet. dear, you have done a great job with this....
    keep up the great work like always.

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