by Goran Rahim
Another greatly written emotional poem by my favorite poet. dear, you have done a great job with this.... |
This is such an excellent poem filled with love and desire, the word choice is great and the flow as well. I know the pain of letting go of the one you love, it's hard but sometimes it's for the best. You'll be a stronnger person for it in the future. amazing write 5/5 |
by UnToLd TrUtH
So beautifully written. I loved the flow and the love that you put into this poem. there was a grammer error though it was in your secong stanza and it was in the first line. Scared should be changed to shared. Other then that it was great! 5/5 |
by Startle Me
Your first stanza? |
by Delie
You're my hero who catches me before I fall. |