Undying Feelings.

by Krzysztof J   Jun 7, 2007


The words i always said,
were sincere and from my heart,
How i would always be there,
Until i turned to dust.

I never broke a promise,
I never lied to you,
To me you're still amazing,
And my love for you still true.

You fell for his comment,
And for his stupid lies,
I tried hard to warn you,
But you thought that i have lied.

He used you like a rubber,
To satisfy his needs,
He didn't want a future,
Nor you as his to be.

I was never like that,
Nor will i ever be,
To me you mean the world,
And forever that will be.

Your eyes are just amazing,
You smile is just the best,
You are so damn unique,
A girl above the rest.

I don't know why you hate me,
Or distrust me so much,
Why cant you find time for me,
Or cast me so aside.

Maybe its because,
I'm past my used by date?
My hearts no longer needed?
Or you want to be used instead?

I don't know what it is,
But it does break my heart,
For I was the genuine guy,
Who was there from the start.

Forever you shall be,
forever in my heart,
I may not ever see you again,
But i loved you from the start.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsie

    "He used you like a rubber,
    To satisfy his needs,
    He didn't want a future,
    Nor you as his to be."<---- i like this a lot

    i totally dig your writting style bro, its really really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Cute, romatic and sweet. i lov it:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Aww very sad, I'm so sorry you feel this way, it breaks my heart cause you seem like such a great guy, and this girl is crazy if she can't see that. You deserve much better, you deserve to be loved and not decieved, and I know how hard it is to find a perfect somebody especially when your heart belongs to another. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Aw so sad for both you and this girl who cant see what a great guy you are.

    "I may not ever see you again,
    But i loved you from the start."

    That is the perfect ending to this poem. It is the line that will stay with me. So much truth and misery. One day you will find a girl that will cherish the fact that you will always be there for her and in return she will be there for you. An amazing poem (5/5) no less than what it deserves no less - i would give it more if i could. Take care.

    Kelly
    xx

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