Break up

by Brian   Jun 7, 2007


WHEN YOU READ THIS PLEASE COMMENT AND OR VOTE

we we're having fun you and me
we we're having a nice night by the sea
something changed that night from good to bad
all because i found out you were dating another lad
i can't beleive this was happening
but i have to face the truth of reality
what brought out the depressing side of me
was actually a tragedy of mistaking love
But when push comes to shove
i dont know why i didnt see it coming
i was too deep into the loving
i thought we had our connection
but as i look in the mirror i see you reflection
but then i look away
i look back up and i still see your face it just wont fade
i look down again then up and it stays
i just want you gone
now you broke my heart
i knew it was wrong
right from the start
i just cant go on
im not that strong
i'll grab this blade and show you where i belong........

The End

by Brian

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  • 17 years ago

    by brytneyxlove

    This is sad i am soo sorry .......hey i commented you comment one of my poems back plz

  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    This is a beautiful poem
    thanks for mqaking me read this piece
    5/5
    love
    amy

    thanks for commenting on my poem... i love that poem..there's so much pain in it...
    well.. it so strange to see a guy write such poems
    check out few of my stuff
    wil return comments
    :-)