Sir, this poem was an unforgatable poem as myself lived my childhood under a civil war in middle east. i know war is danger and everything but CIVIL war is like two brothers fighting for no reason, so it s up to us to open our mind and understand where it will lead us?
truly this was a great poem Sir.

Is there anything civil about nations at war?
Will men ever learn to live in peace forevermore?

I wonder why did you write "forevermore" I could rhyme better by " forever". But the poem is outstanding as always.

This is so true. I loved the wording and the flow was absolutely flawless.

I liked the topic in those and it was reality that you tried to talk about...The flow was great
And my fave lines were;

Love heals the wounds and sins are forgiven
Is there anything civil about nations at war?
Will men ever learn to live in peace forevermore?

So true,
Laura