The Ending Point

by 19Rusty   Jun 7, 2007


When everything has fallen away from me,
no longer do I have a hate that lives in me,
but a feeling of understanding, of my being older,
factoring in the faults and coming up with something
that becomes another little needle in my side,
growing older they grow bigger, all of these nails
in my side.

It could be anything at any given time,
a lover, or a confusion that just won't end,
but I am about at the end, and nothing is
going to satisfy, what problems I start,
a new beginning, and the broken memories
become a mother, to nurture them and break me
down, they know that in minutes I'll find something
else to take its place.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    This is really good! I like that it's different, but it really made sense to me and i especially like the part about the needles. Good piece :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I really like it the flow was awesome! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    I loved ittt... that was soo good! i really like your style of writing. and the flow was great! 5/5 from me :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris

    Great poem. i love the imagery... the nails and needles in the side. my favorite lines are
    "but I am about at the end, and nothing is
    going to satisfy." so, once again, good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow yeah thats the ending point 5/5 i liked it alot maybe u could read one of mine,.

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