Hollow

by claire   Jun 7, 2007


It's like seeing the emperor
Without any clothes
She's a crestfallen mountain
That was just a hollow pose

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sabree

    Hmmm...this is a hard one to say. It is extremely short...yet beautiful in a way i cant seem to describe. This one has stumped me. I shall give you a 4/5 for the efforts...and for making me think about it. :)

    -Sabree

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Nice, but very short. I've never seen anything like it.

    Rave

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Nice, but very short. I've never seen anything like it.

    Rave

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