by Chelsey Jun 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
And the award for best liar goes to |
by Sarah
Great diction. Very well poem. |
by Alexa Eudis
I love the bitterness, its fantastic! |
by Jenni Marie
What a beautiful heartfelt piece. i loved the emotion and depth you portrayed in this piece. the similies you used added for a powerful effect on the overall piece. you opened this beautifully and it just got better as it went along. flow was good throughout as was the imagery. i loved the ending line, i found it to be very intense and hardhitting. |
Our love was a battle waiting to be lost |
Excellent poem, sad and deep, felt the hurt and be tail, well written piece, great job , your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |