It may be short but its sweet 5/5

Short and sweet no critiscism for this one i can totaly effin relate its effin good goodjob~melissaraye~

So short, but fabulous all the same. :]] I can relate to this one so much. Fabulous job hun. Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Excellent poem good wording , short but I know exactly where you are coming from ,great write and if you ever need to talk to someone , I'm always here, been through over 15 years of abuse, physical and mental, so I know, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Wow that just like me

Short and right to the point.
Great Job.

It may be short, but it goes straight to the point.
good job love.
keep writing, you'll get better.
we all have things to learn.
5/5.

I can relate on this one, deep meaning and nicely written. 5
=)

Short but good.

It was short and
sweet like my scars
u commented
on it isnt ur best or ur
worst
with ur talent i dont think
u could write a bad poem a
but i still liked it

Despite being relatively short, you managed to pack in so much depth and emotion which isn't always easy to do. i wasn't to sure on the repetition, i liked it at first but as i read onwards it got a little irritating. other than that, you did a wonderful job with this.

Short AND Beautiful!
Wonderful JoB!
So much emotion throughout the entire poem.

Great work!

5.5 *_*

Short AND Beautiful!
Wonderful JoB!
So much emotion throughout the entire poem.

Great work!

5.5 *_*