Hey I like this poem. It's really sad. When it seems you don't have a father around but that's why we make father figures. Great job. 5/5
-vino

I feel this way cause my father died in 2004 when i was 9. i have a poem about it but its not on here yet called"always say good night" ill be sure to tell you when i get it on here keep it up your on my favorites (:

Oh my god that made me cry because it reminds me of my dad who died when i was 2 .. I dnt have a step dad, no one to call my dad. Read my poem: hey dad.

Great poem, I feel ya xxx