Vent Out of Angry in My Body.

by EmOToMbOy13   Jun 7, 2007


Hit Hit Hit the ball
Hit Hit Hit the ball
The bat are on my hands
I tight the bat
But I keep think that I don't have bat
I keep think "hand, hand, hand, hand!"
I stare at the pitcher
I gave pitcher a dirty face with mad expression
The pitcher starts to throw ball
I get ready to swing it
The ball is coming toward to me
I start to swing it my hands are straight to the ball
Where my bat connect the ball
And i hit the ball so hard
The ball flies up
The ball over the frence
I feel so good when i hited the ball
Hit hit hit the ball
Hit hit hit the ball

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxSweetSuicidexX

    Nice..poem lol

  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    Cool poem, but it doesnt always make sense

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    That's a pretty good poem, but some of the words didn't make sense. I liked how you used repetitive words, so overall, great job. I don't think a full 5/5, but definately a 4 :D.
    Keep it up!

    With all due Respect,
    Hatori
    The Illusionist

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you comment and vote on a poem that I have writen??

  • 17 years ago

    by Getting Out of the Sea

    It is pretty good but sometimes, u need to desbribe more than just softball. Just try to get your angry feelings out of you, and try to do something like your life!! heh lol
    i love you, my bf4l, emotomboy

    luv k

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