It is pretty good but sometimes, u need to desbribe more than just softball. Just try to get your angry feelings out of you, and try to do something like your life!! heh lol
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That's a pretty good poem, but some of the words didn't make sense. I liked how you used repetitive words, so overall, great job. I don't think a full 5/5, but definately a 4 :D.
Keep it up!

With all due Respect,
Hatori
The Illusionist

P.S. If you get a chance, could you comment and vote on a poem that I have writen??

Cool poem, but it doesnt always make sense

Nice..poem lol