I think the last part makes perfect sense and i like the title.. everything you wrote in this poem def does make sense and i agree with all of it.. life is always better when you have someone to share it with.. nice job =]

That was a great poem, and im glad my poetry inspired you, Keep it up your an awesome poet

That was a great poem, and im glad my poetry inspired you, Keep it up your an awesome poet

Good Job, the whole poem makes sense and displays a sense of care for those who are sorta suffering through life.