Thats was beautiful...lol i had a tear in my eye...lol... na but that was really good you are very talented i wish i was that good someday i might be...

Im in love with this poem, it shows anticipation in a sense, I shows that what ever the case may be in life it always has the potential to end, Wonderful poem

Wow what a poem.. i love the way you wrote it too.. it really is a very powerful poem.. nice job 5/5.. thanks for the comment =]

This poem was so sad.
i love it.
it has a strong meaning.
keep up the good work
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

This is my favorite of yours so far. The message is clear and precise, the word choice is grand, the flow is impecable...and the grammar is not hideous. I enjoyed the way you wrote it, and although i did not have a tear in my eye...it did move me. Write more like this...not this topic, but with this level of emotion. It is very good. I shall go on a limb and give you a 5/5 on this one, but dont dissapoint me. Keep up the good work!

-Sabree

Good poem even though it was sad. Really good!!!

Great job!!!

5/5

Good poem even though it was sad. Really good!!!

Great job!!!

5/5