by RetroRavey
Another great poem. I'm glad I read it. 5/5 |
It's funny how so many people tell us to do something yet they do it themselves, parents for example. Great write and the words were so true 5/5 |
by Kristina
This was a very well written poem. i really like what it was about and all. nicely done! 5/5 |
Very good, I can relate to that definately. The flow was ok, but the word work was great. 5/5 |
This poem was difficult to understand because of the way you worded it.. also i didnt really understand what emotion or story this poem was trying to give off... although the structure is fine the flow wasnt really there.. i'd give it a 3/5 but i will vote a 5 anyway to keep your score at a perfect 5 |
by Georgi
Hey babe |
by me
Like 4 real disz poem wusz really go0d nd i actually really do like ur poemsz dey have meaning nd also if i wusz u i would hang wit dat hipocrit no moree ;) (just a suggestiionn) still 5/5 |
Always seeming to be looking |
Uh, yeah...okay there something about it that I kinda liked but at the same time there was something working against it. I like the last stanza. The flow was a little off now and then because of some of the wording. It's actually interesting though. |
by Cheyanne
I really enjoyed this poem, it kind of reminded me of my relationship with my mother. |
by Cheyanne
I really enjoyed this poem, it kind of reminded me of my relationship with my mother. |
by mexima
This was great! |