by Startle Me Jun 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Woman takes hold of her gorgeous baby, |
Wow. this is a great poem. also pretty sad. for someone to be treated like that is not right. but amazing poem. you can really tell you worked hard. and it shows. great!! 5/5 |
by Sandra D
I like this poem, it was SO unique! |
by Sandra D
I like this poem, it was SO unique! |
I personally think there is a lot of emotion in this poem. The mother is soo proud to have this baby, and she already loves it. And then, she finds out that it isn't as perfect as it appears to be, and she grows disgusted with it, and that in itself could take the meaning of this poem even deeper. Humans are never satisfied. We don't realize that NOTHING is perfect and that when we strive for perfection, we are bound to fail, because perfection is impossible to attain. Did I go way off the handle with that??? Anyway, I really liked this poem!! 5/5 |
by Tara Kay
I liked how you researched what you wrote, it shows that your poems must be flawless. It didnt lack emotion, it would be nice to see this revised from the mother's point of view. |