by Alicia Jun 8, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
You say we're best friends, |
by Birgit
I like this poem =) It's strong. And I think a lot of people can rely ;] But maybe you should change the "juts" into just =P |
by claire
This is a great poem, but the vocab isn't all really poetic. on the otherhand, that makes is seem a little more honest. either way, i like it :) |