Wow very deep. Awsome Job!

I think tis a very good poem andrew, as always a 5/5 form me, keep thm coming!!!

Wow that was just so amazing wow your really good i give it a 5/5

nikki

Very nice poem , you made it short but meaningful , it helps me get inspired , since lately all i have been doing is crying , and youre right , yet nothing has changed .

Great poem =]

A nice poem... fight if there are still hopes but what if there are less hopes or there's no more hopes do u still need to fight?..hehehe anyway like this one

This is good. strong too .

THIS IS AN EXTRAORDINARY POEM!!! IT GIVES ME HOPE THAT I NEED AND IT MAKES A GREAT STRONG POINT...IT IS DEFINITELY DEFINITLEY A FANTASTIC POEM!!! I LOVE IT!!! TERRIFIC JOB!!!

THIS IS AN EXTRAORDINARY POEM!!! IT GIVES ME HOPE THAT I NEED AND IT MAKES A GREAT STRONG POINT...IT IS DEFINITELY DEFINITLEY A FANTASTIC POEM!!! I LOVE IT!!! TERRIFIC JOB!!!

Loving it , you are such a good writer , please write more , its great inspiration to those who are down and dont realize the power they have.