A Lonely Soul Set Free.

This wasn't the best poem I've read of yours, but it's very beautiful, and very heartbreaking. The flow was great, only rough in one area, and the wording was beautiful. Great job!

5/5

This poem is so heartbreaking... but very well written... the imagery is amazing... and it's a very relatable poem... sometimes it's easy to feel like giving up on everything but the people around you keep you going... it's sad that isn't always the case. Nice poem... I love it! Definatly a 5/5 from me! Take care :-) I've really enjoyed your poems~ Hope you like the ones you read of mine as well!~

Aw tragic :| I like the way you repeated the opening stanza in the end. Flow was smooth, I like the emotions running in this poem, well done. I think everyone can relate to this poem. Keep writing!

Wow, there's a lot of depth to this poem. "There consuming her whole." should be [They're] And the line "upon a porch made of clay" Taking the word made out would give it a nicer flow. Overall I thought this was a great piece. 5/5

marcella

This is so heartbreaking to read, and yet so beautifully written at the same time...
I love the 'porch made out of clay' and I love how you swapped from sitting to lying dead at the beginning and end, made a very powerful effect to the poem...you did a great job on such a sad topic.