Comments : I Never Realized

  • 17 years ago

    by reborn

    Not sure how recent that is especially if u had a previous account. so might not matter what i'm gonna say but i think this guy in the end didn't care about u (at all)... for if u assured him u did no wrong n he saw the pain of losing him did to u he should have backed down from his decision if he did still care for u in that way, which i'm afraid he did not. the poem itself is really good so gonna give u a 5/5 well deserved.
    especially liked:
    "How much I cried
    That note was thoroughly soaked
    And at that very moment
    My heart completely broke "

    "Tears filled my eyes
    There was a lot of pain and sorrow
    What am I gonna do?
    How am I going to survive tomorrow?"