by Brittany C Jun 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Looking across the crowded room, |
by ALEX
:) This is a good acrostic! Something that doesn't happen very often, so be proud of yourself. 5/5 |
by N3Na
I love it and the acrotic type poems r my fav |
by heather
Very good i could feel the poem . |
by me
Ii really liked ur poem nd how u made dat sentence an acrostic poem nd put all ur thoughtsz nd ideasz together i think it could of been a little bit better but i still really liked it 5/5 =] GREAT JOB |
by Vanessa
Sweet, and wonderfully refreshing. do you believe in love at first sight? I do, that was how I found my husband lol. Anyways I love this the flow was great, the word choice was excellent, and the emtion was touching, as ususal you have done an excellent job. 5/5 |