I loved the poem because most people don't realize how important grandparents are, we often take them for granted. Excellent job with this piece, great flow and word choice as well, the words were very heartfelt 5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
Wow dear, this was a great and unique poem, i remember reading it before but i dont know why i didnt left a comment. maybe because i was crying reading it, as myself i have never experienced the love of grandparants. |
by Marc Ortiz
I really like the ending. I think it was perfect. Vocab was great, Flow was smooth throughout the poem. Good choice of words. another 5/5! keep writing! |