I liked it. The word choice was great and the flow was wonderful. I gave this poem a 5/5.

I think we all have those feelings sometimes where no matter what you do nothing seems to be right and we're just miserable all the time. Excellent poem with great choice of words 5/5

This was indeed a pleasure to read. I think Depression can get fatal from now and then because I, even I, can feel sad with no apparent reasons at all. This unknown despair gave me the impression of what death is like, must be, and so-on's and so-ons. Gladly though, I haven't thought of commiting suicide... Beautifully written, nonetheless. The concluding line simply summed it all up. =] Nice work.

Wow i LOVE THIS POEM! just recently i have become a HUGE fan of non-rhyming poems.. this one is really great! the flow was perfect and even though the word choices were simple the emotion is felt :D

Like i said...if its the writer's thing you r doing then hey ...u get 5/5...and that's it...no questions asked...keep writing it off your mind and heart...take care...with love...micahlord here

It was a great poem, Language use was good. I emotions was raw, good job! Fantastic work!

I know non-satisfying life and this feeling..But suicide won't give you anything,believe me
And look at the positive side of your life..I know I sounded so optimist and like I can't understand you but well I'm just like you but being a pessimist won't bring me anything

I hope this helps
Smile now :]]
Take care,
Laura

This was an interesting read. I liked the meaning of which you portrayed really well. The flow was great and your word choice simple yet effective holding such emotion which was strong powerful and in real depth. This was quite a beautiful read which you have here. Well done on writing an exceptional sad poem~mel

Hold on there. I feel your pain. This poem spoke to me differently than any other poem I've read lately. You did a wonderful job.
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Wow splendid. Very well described how your life has changed and how grief has dominated your life. Another outstanding poem from you. Great indeed. tc

I think we all have these moments that we feel depressed, and I really like how you put that in a poem =] so nice poem! ^^ Keep it up.

Again the ending wasnt as strong as it should have been
i mean the poem itself was great
but the ending wasnt good enough

4/5