I loved this poem. I found it to be quite amazing speaking true facts here. Kept me interested from start till finish. one thing though I think you should capitalize the first letter of each line it just makes the poem a little neater. Other then that this was a good read. Well done~mel

I like the message of this poem, it's really deep.
Great choice of words, too.
5/5

Wow so true!! this poem is so true and just sees tht this world has gotta change and now...a 5/5 and adin this to mi fav poems list and on the disscusion on the free comments u added the same poem link twice..so yea just lettin ya know

Ah, what a true poem. It is sad that you're completely right. Why should the world have to be this way? It's heart breaking, it really is. Great poem.

Alesia <3