Sad love poem, but then most love does end that way. It expressed very powerful emotion and it made me feel for the person in it. I esspecialy liked the third last stanza

why? I ask myself....
I brought this all on
I'm too tired to keep going
so sick of being strong

It seemed really heartfelt and powerful. liked it a lot
Some of the rhymimg was off in places but I don't feel it took away from it too much.
Good sad love poem =)