by jason Jun 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
In this cold dark world |
I liked it on wait i loved it |
It was truly emotional i loved it |
by Alesia
Such a sad poem. It's almost heart breaking how that's prolly more then likely true. The flow was off, but can simply be fixed by putting it into stanzas. |
It was deep yet you portrayed the meanings perfectly. I would give you a 5/5 |
Loved this poem!>..gr8 write |