Comments : If Life Was A Dream (Collab)

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey Cindy!!

    Thanks for sharing the title with me & i remember the way it struck me right at that moment, i was getting an impression that this work load has taken my will to write and i wont be able to write anymore but this title just gave that awaited punch to me and here we are again on the site together..

    If life was a dream
    I'd never feel alone
    Pain would not exist
    For you would be home

    I know what you mean here and i know how this title came....though i cant change things but atleast i am part of this and thats what satisfies me.

    lovely poem dear

    thank you for everything

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Wow this such heartwarming love poem , so beautiful .we all wish such love to exist in our life which makes ones live worth to live.You two really creat the best of best together :)

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    In my opinion, Nitin and yourself write the best and most beautiful collabs on the site. You two write with such love and passion, and you express yourselves well. Again, I loved this poem, even reading it a second time still makes me smile. Excellent work. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Aaaah what a romatic poem. i lvoed the way you write it nicely paneed aswell. i love it. take care 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a very good and beautiful poem,
    love the flow,
    u know its a perfect 5/5!!!
    keep them coming!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Reading this delightful piece gives me warmth and fuzziness inside. It's 4:25 AM, and I still can't cease from smiling :). I really liked the theme which both of you portrayed in it, it was splendidly done, as always!

    I'm looking forward to read more of your collab works soon. Take care.

    Love,
    Debbe

  • 17 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem!!!
    Hi Cindy!
    I liked this lines:

    If life was a dream
    Why would I need to sleep?
    When I have you by my side
    And your heart to keep

    5/5!

    Regards,

    Ray

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Love the title and the repetition of the title at the beginning of each verse.....you two are the shining stars of collab writing! Great stuff....congrats!

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "If life was a dream
    No tear would fall from eyes
    No prayer will go unheard
    True love could never die"

    i love that stanza...the whole poem hit a sweet spot i hate to admit i have, i actually had to read it a few times, and every time i came across something new, true talent indeed, great work you guys!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Very well written, I loved the title, and every line flowed so well.
    This is a remarkable piece
    Great work to both of you guys
    Love Tara-Kay
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgi

    The rhyme in this was beautiful i really enjoyed reading this!
    well done
    Geo
    ps. if u have time please comment my latest?
    i gave this a 5
    xoxxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Life is not a dream
    So there are millions who cry
    Because they have no loved one
    To make their tears run dry

    haha I dont know why I felt like I had to rhyme when I commented but your poem made me do that!......But while reading your poem thats what I was thinking...life isn't a dream thats why so many are hurt because like you said, if it was....wouldn't we all be happy? Wouldn't this be a great world if life were the way we lived? Sad thing is no one wants to even try and make that happen!
    Loved this write...great job to the both of you!
    Chels

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Beautiful! I love your poetry it is excellent your pieces stand out from many others and speak of a love unknown that only few experience and fewer can write about so well. xox lithium

  • 17 years ago

    by Phil

    Great poem , I wish that life was a dream sometimes, but its not worst luck

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    That's absolutely excellent and so true. If life would be a dream things would be much better. Sometimes I just wish life would be that way. Great poem! I love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    A beautiful poem with a nice flow.
    I love to read it!

    Thanks for commenting my poems, I really appreciate it.
    Wonder what you think about my last one.

    Love to read more of your poems.

    Hébe

  • 17 years ago

    by heather

    If life was a dream
    You'd be here with me
    Laughing, hand in hand
    Smiling for all to see
    ........that was my fav part.
    god job .

  • 17 years ago

    by uwouldntno

    Wow this is a really good poem... I hope you continue writeing you are very good

    sincerely yours

    uwouldntno

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem as always from the master, great job loved it , my favor line was: If life was a dream
    No plans would be betrayed
    Love will shower everywhere
    No need to be afraid
    I really needed them words all my life thanks Cindy , you made me feel better, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Cindy,
    you two have done an excellent job in this piece.Such a wonderful poem you have written.The title is very well written and so is the poem.I can relate to it so much!!!How beautifully you have done this.I can quite imagine how you have done like.The ryhming was excellent.Each stanza was very well written.I over come felt like reading it again and again.The moment I finished reading this how it got stuck through my head.You two have done an excellent job!!!
    WELL DONE!!!
    all the best
    and take care