Hey Cindy!! |
by chavii
Wow this such heartwarming love poem , so beautiful .we all wish such love to exist in our life which makes ones live worth to live.You two really creat the best of best together :) |
by Liz
In my opinion, Nitin and yourself write the best and most beautiful collabs on the site. You two write with such love and passion, and you express yourselves well. Again, I loved this poem, even reading it a second time still makes me smile. Excellent work. 5/5 |
by Boy
Aaaah what a romatic poem. i lvoed the way you write it nicely paneed aswell. i love it. take care 5/5 |
by Bryan
Tis a very good and beautiful poem, |
by Debbie
Reading this delightful piece gives me warmth and fuzziness inside. It's 4:25 AM, and I still can't cease from smiling :). I really liked the theme which both of you portrayed in it, it was splendidly done, as always! |
by Ray Blue
Great poem!!! |
by debbylyn
Love the title and the repetition of the title at the beginning of each verse.....you two are the shining stars of collab writing! Great stuff....congrats! |
"If life was a dream |
by Tara Kay
Very well written, I loved the title, and every line flowed so well. |
by Georgi
The rhyme in this was beautiful i really enjoyed reading this! |
by Chelsey
Life is not a dream |
by Lithium
Beautiful! I love your poetry it is excellent your pieces stand out from many others and speak of a love unknown that only few experience and fewer can write about so well. xox lithium |
by Phil
Great poem , I wish that life was a dream sometimes, but its not worst luck |
by moonlil
That's absolutely excellent and so true. If life would be a dream things would be much better. Sometimes I just wish life would be that way. Great poem! I love it. |
by Hebe
A beautiful poem with a nice flow. |
by heather
If life was a dream |
by uwouldntno
Wow this is a really good poem... I hope you continue writeing you are very good |
Excellent poem as always from the master, great job loved it , my favor line was: If life was a dream |
Cindy, |