Hi, Amber. As this week's POW, you are priveleged of five comments by Mel and me. :)

On the whole, this poem was quite well-presented. It progressed in a fine manner which gives its readers a sense of hopelessness. Nicely done, dear. =] I gave it a 5/5!

Debbie

This poem was quite an interesting. I liked the emotion portrayed. It was nicely written and the poems structure and style was presented nicely. Well done on this poem ~mel

Wow, I really like this one! keep it up