by Bonnie Rose Jun 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
In your fairness, your unchanging smile, |
by Mandy Grace
Very good poem.... i liked how it was simple and yet so affective! it was wonderfull. |
by Rose Noble
Is poem was interesting. You grasped your concept and it had a great rhythm. It's great, I'm just into rhyming poetry a bit more. 5/5, though. <3 |
by Debbie
This was rather delightful to read. You grasped your diction in this piece quite well. I also loved the ambiance of seeming prehistoric times applied on this piece. It was simply lovely. Thank you for sharing! |
WOW that was awesome , great poem , love it , short and straight to point, you have a lovely way of using your words and expressing your feelings , great job sweetie, keep it up. your friend Tracy 5/5 |