WOW that was awesome , great poem , love it , short and straight to point, you have a lovely way of using your words and expressing your feelings , great job sweetie, keep it up. your friend Tracy 5/5

This was rather delightful to read. You grasped your diction in this piece quite well. I also loved the ambiance of seeming prehistoric times applied on this piece. It was simply lovely. Thank you for sharing!

Marian

Is poem was interesting. You grasped your concept and it had a great rhythm. It's great, I'm just into rhyming poetry a bit more. 5/5, though. <3
Rose

Very good poem.... i liked how it was simple and yet so affective! it was wonderfull.

mandy :)