This poem is fantastic and the flow is amazing as well, I loved the imagery throughout the poem especially the first stanza I could picture it word for word. "Forgotten dresses dance with dust
Once-new windows lined with rust" those were my favourite lines. Excellent write 5/5

Cool poem. I really liked it. The flow of this poem was great and I loved the word choice. It was like something from a movie. I gave it a 5/5.

"Many lives these memories have [stoled]" - stolen.

Admirable piece. I adore the imagery you depicted in every line and stanza--splendidly written. In my mind's eye, I see the whole fire accident ardently. (My bad if I'm mistaken by that notion.) 5/5

Marian

Heh.
I actually liked it.
I usually don't finish poetry
Because I correct them too much.
And the owners just get mad at me.
But for this?
There's nothing I wouldn't change except
Adding some punctuation in there.

All in all.
Flow and emotion were perfect.
Grammar was okay.
But 5.5