A Shadow

by Reminders Torture   Jun 8, 2007


She is scared to be alone.
no-one to save her from pain.
she is so terrified of her,
what the future will entail.

she'll be forever in this miserable,
state.the doors are slamming.
and the glasses are breaking.
and shes falling with no delay.

she lies on her bed,screaming,
on her head,pain will be with her,
never leaving,and it goes with,
with her everywhere,like a shadow.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great piece, with powerful imagery.
    I wrote poems with similar topic, and I really like this one.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very well worded poem with nice feelings in it. Your metaphors are really catching and the lexical power is lucid. 5/5 piece

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved how this flowed.
    So fast and powerful, the words were like barbs..

    "she lies on her bed,screaming,
    on her head,pain will be with her,
    never leaving,and it goes with,
    with her everywhere,like a shadow."

    And an excellent ending.
    Well done m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

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