Cutting 101

by Broken Saint   Jun 8, 2007


The first may hurt but it's not bad
For afterwards it makes you glad
That you've done this taboo practice
Now learn to do it without malice

A second stroke and out comes blood
The dark seed in you starts to bud
Growing deep in your subconscious
Just be patient, don't be anxious

The third one comes with much less gloom
Now here your flower is in bloom
You feel the joy of crimson tears
A drug that takes away your fears

And here's the fourth with a sweet smile
You know that you are in denial
You know that what you're doing's wrong
Yet the urge is just too strong

The fifth one comes with greater ease
Now you may cut just as you please
No longer bound by any chains
Experiment with the many pains

Grab a friend and have a session
Help each other ease depression
Grab a knife or just a blade
And re-invent the games you've played

Carve your name into his palm
Or staple it if he is calm
Tic-tac-toe seems like no harm
Lest you slash it on your arm

These may sound a bit sadistic
Unless, of course, you're masochistic
Just be careful and not careless
Lest you want to end up lifeless

A final word before I go:
Share with others what you know
They may want to join the club
Greet them well, don't be a snob

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i'm thinking of a better ending for this one.. any suggestions? i'll add it if i like it and commend the author as well..
just send me a msg..
Thanks!!

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~broken saint~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Wow i really liked this poem great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    I loved it so much and it is so true. Thanks for writing this!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alana

    I liked this poem. you did a very good job on it.

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    A final word before i go
    share with others what you know
    maybe with you they'll let it show
    what it's like to feel so low

    umm... idk but i hope it helps u if not im sry cuz im not that good of a writer n e ways but i really liked it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    This is like creepy but nicely written at the same time.. o_O
    xxx