Since I first saw you,

by Rakebul Robin   Jun 8, 2007


Since I first saw you,
my heart has been lost in thoughts of you.
What is that my heart now says, so quietly, with its every beat?
I've begun to fall in love;
I've begun to lose my heart.
What people have started to say...in such talk, my heart grows anxious.
What's really the truth here? Will you tell me?
Who am I, in the end?
How long will I hide it?
Hide a hundred thousand things from me;
I still know everything.
On every tongue tomorrow
will be the tale of our romance.

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  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    Ya, i agree - flow isn't perfect, but ideas are great and this has a lot of truthand emotion in it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Nice depth and description needs just a little better transition 4/5 very nice