Comments : Crazy about you

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    If I may suggest, perhaps breaking the lines into stanzas will enhance the fow and the piece itself as well? Nevertheless, it was a delightful read. This adorable piece simply breathes out Poetry by the use of a good number of metaphors.

    An enjoyable read. I'm looking forward to read more of your works. (^^,)

    Debbie