by Georgi Jun 8, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Like the lethal dusty cobra, darling, shed your skin. |
by Katran
Omg, this poem is..magical. it is the best poem i have read all year, probably one of the best i have EVER read. it was magic. truly poetic. good work. |
This was nifty....it was executed very well..the descriptions were phenominal...keep up the good work. 5/5 |
Holy biscuits, that was wonderful! THANK YOU for asking me to read and comment on this, because it definitely deserves it; I am impressed. The images were so dark and bleak, yet so wonderfully thought out. Your rhyming? Fantastic! |
by firexdancer
O.O that was gorgeous!!! it gave me chills just reading it! i applaud you for that. it really was a magnificent piece of art, the phrases were long, but for you that seems to work extremely well, and the flow and vocabulary were amazing! |
Wow...I'm speechless for once lols That was amazing =D The best poem I've read for a while *and thats saying something around here lols* This one's going on my favorite poems list ^_^ A well deserved 5 =) |