Amazing poem, excellently written. |
by Jessica
Ohmygod. Wow. This was AMAZING. I am literally speechless, this was excellent. And you say I have good vocabulary?? Yourss is amaazing. The flow in this was great, the descriptions were so poetic and metaphoric, and the emotion was clear. This poem was so unique and thats a rare thing these days. I just loved the idea of leeches sucking your blood and snakes putting in venom. So either way you die. This was really really good, i love it. 5/5 |
O......M......G..... this poem is simply amazing. It's so deep and dark that it makes my skin crawl, in a good way, lol. Personally, to me, this poem speaks of listening to your inner voice, and how when you ingore it sometimes you feel like you're being eaten from the inside out and that you if you had only listened to your inner voice, instead of the other voice, you wouldn't be feeling regret. This poem is very deep and I can't come up with a word good enough to descibe the imagry. I'm amazed. I LOVED it. 5/5 seems a shame. |
Wow...That was very deep...And so amaziling beatiful...It was written very well...I couldn't stop reading it...5/5... |
by Rocky
This wasn't what i was looking for but i'll comment as its unuasually good for this format. i can tell alot of thought went into this poem. it is unusualy deep and captivating.. i especialy liked this stanza ~Of course you see its comfort, its offer thats consistent, |
by Sophie
Im speechless. And mesmerised. That is just amazingly and beautifully beautiful. And just basically amazing. It's so intelligently written. And deep. And powerful. You have such a gift. I'd give it like 10000/5 given the chance. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. |
by Startle Me
Like the lethal dusty cobra, darling[[]] shed your skin. |
WOW!! |
Wow.....thasts poem was jsut wow....my favoret part was the hole thing...but my favoret line was "Writhing, bleeding, stretching, as you clench your insides tight" |
by Fluffy
Brilliant. :) |
by Cindy
Very deep and dark emotion are coming from this piece. Great job! |
The flow was amazing, |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
First off, this poem is so long, but i have to read it because just the title adn the first line seem interesting enough. |
by ashley
This is amazing very good use of rhyming and imagery. |
by Miu
This was so amazing that i read it twice:) Very deep and captivating. Powerful and simply beautiful. |
by Marc Ortiz
Beautiful poem! I love it. I like the opening stanza, good use of simile. Excellent choice of words! Well penned The descriptions are strong and the poem is really deep. 5/5! |
by Just Sierra
WOW Geo!! all of the people who commented your poems left you extremely long comments and detailed critiques. I don't know how I can do that lol, but it was beaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaautiful!!! BY FAR THE BEST POEM YOUVE EVER WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so elegant and unique. The details were just...wow. Vocabulary-amazing!!!!!! JUST LIKE YOU!! That was brilliant!!!!!!! |
by Alex Marlatt
Wow, absolutely amazing poem. It's deep, utilizes powerful metaphors, strong solid vocabulary and very very descriptive. Well done on the rhyming and the message is wonderful. It says to me that you need to sing about the better things in life and not let the bad things like the "Terror of rejection, and fright of your desire" get you down. |
Oh. |
by MyDevotion
Wow.............The wording is absolutely amazing! I mean this is trully a work of art, perfection honestly! Every line keeps to captivated until the very end! Brilliant!!! Loved it! |