I have never met anyone who writes like you... This poem writes the depths of imagination where no one has ever thought of.. You are more than amazing! :)

Wow omg. that is so well written. i just fell into that poem. it flowed perfectly and i love the way you use your words. you really are a talented writer. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Hmm. intresting poem. it was nicey panned aswell
Dont listen to its melody, sing back in loud, strong verse,
And tell it that its time for its existence to reverse,
The only thing thats cradling desires to be dead
Is that terrifying, oscillating, voice inside your head

i love thes lines allot. you realy have great talent.
i will must give you 5/5

Wow...I'm speechless for once lols That was amazing =D The best poem I've read for a while *and thats saying something around here lols* This one's going on my favorite poems list ^_^ A well deserved 5 =)
Great work,
Rhea

O.O that was gorgeous!!! it gave me chills just reading it! i applaud you for that. it really was a magnificent piece of art, the phrases were long, but for you that seems to work extremely well, and the flow and vocabulary were amazing!
i'm adding this to my favorites
5/5
gabriella

Holy biscuits, that was wonderful! THANK YOU for asking me to read and comment on this, because it definitely deserves it; I am impressed. The images were so dark and bleak, yet so wonderfully thought out. Your rhyming? Fantastic!

This poem is going on my favourites.

And thank you very much for the commenting of my poem. :)

This was nifty....it was executed very well..the descriptions were phenominal...keep up the good work. 5/5
Brit

Omg, this poem is..magical. it is the best poem i have read all year, probably one of the best i have EVER read. it was magic. truly poetic. good work.