What Have You Done?

by Lauren   Jun 8, 2007


What have you done to me?
a fog of betrayal as emotions seep.
once we tasted paradise,
wide-eyed and wide-eyed,
but your love died.
a sickening vision of lies -
memories follow love, follow death,
love torn apart.
in a rush of hate,
i hate you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This one is good. I like it. It's different.

    I liked how it's short but also strong. I think my favorite part is the ending, and I could really feel the hatred throughout the poem.

    Good job! 5/5

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