Aw~! Its simple and cute keep up the good work 5/5

That was a very sweet poem,wish my lisa felt the same, great job, nice flow and wording was good, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

Hi
very nice and beautiful good work keep it up 5/5 .
and i'll appreciate your vote and comment for my poems
hani

I love your poem
keep it up ok

Very nice lovely poem. 5/5. Would have loved my Lisa to feel the same way two, but I guess not.

Read my poem Called "The Devil in the Black Dress", its about my Lisa, but save to say the love is gone...

I really love the theme of the poem. The message you portrayed is good, I hope my ex.. feels the same.. Anyway.. Flow was smooth, well done.

Aww thats wicked nice flow aswel i like the ending line because that is honestly true :)

Your poems i absolutely beautiful Lisa, i love it. anyway im new in this internet and i started love poems too much this year, i wish there is so much i can learn from you, keep it up!

Its beautiful

I like this one....Its simple beautiful, and sweet....5/5...I love it!:)....Your friend...*Melody*.=)

Beautifully written