by iloveyouandrew Jun 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Please just understand |
Very cute...but in the first stanza you should change the you and your to him and his.....because it doesnt match the other pronouns in the rest of the poem...hope it helps! |
by Lady Nik
I can really relate to this. I loved it. Keep up the great work Shanik |