Force me into hell

by XcrissyX   Jun 8, 2007


It started of,
when she stole the one i loved,
broke my heart,
and as if that wasn't enough,
she stole one of my best friends too,
but its hard for peeps to see through,
her pretty eyes and long shiny hair,
the way she acts like she really cares,
but no one can see,
the shit shes doing to me,
she has everything i could ever dream
but now i know her well,
iv learned people arnt all they seem,
watching my friends slowly disappear,
one day they all will go,
and that day i'll always fear,
all because this girl,
isn't satisfied with what shes got,
so shes taking my life,
but me everyone has forgot,
so no one will understand,
no one there too hold my hand,
coz shes got them under a spell,
tryna force me into hell.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nina Mendoza

    Oooh gurl... i feel you. thats exactally how i feel about my ex best friend! great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    I couldn't stop reading this poem. Its breath-takingly good! I read it about three times. I only found one thing that might make it sound better.
    "one day they all will go,"
    To me, it would sound better if you said it
    "one day they will all go,"
    But thats just what I think. It's up to you how you say it. But I think it was an amazing poem!

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