I LOVED THIS ONE TO ~MELISSARAYE~

You have a great gift for poetry, you should keep going and see where it takes you.

You are very good at capturing a mood

This is good as well =)! Keep it uppp!

Wow that was really good. it has a good rhythm to it and it's also so true. good job :]

True and powerfully so. You have given reality a face. Honest luck!

Every single word is true!
And the way you expressed the whole thing is excellent.
I really like it! keep up the great job!