I LIKED IT I TOTALLY UNDERSATND

Then ending was slightly confusing, just the last line, but the whole poem was well done and sad.
"covering her cry with a quiet sigh" that was a good line. well described!
Charisma*

At one point I really did'nt like myself either, I just wish that the person that made me feel better was here, she knew how greatful I was for her.

Awwww thats so sad but its really good. i like it. deff 5/5!

xo kisses xo

You know what, this is actually a very good poem, the last four lines were a little teensy weensy confusing but over all two thumbs up!

This is just.. FANTASTIC! .. i really loved it! keep up the great writing.
Awsome!