by Jaded Serenity Jun 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The violence the exceeds his mouth |
by Sara
I really like this poem. I could feel the emotion. you did a really good job at capturing that certain emotion |
No kidding. i could tell you worked very hard on that poem. its great. |
by Kaz
Yeah, omg this is something i can really connect with because I have/am in this situation....but looser now.....i Like it, so swiftly and gently written so easily understood, like the innocence of a child.. |
by Laith
Real good, I loved it deep, true and perfectly writen, I wanna read more of this kind. |
by oddi tea
A sad poem. The hard work really shows. I love the flow. Keep writting and you will go far! |