So many emotions captured in such a way that its awe inspiring =D

A sad poem. The hard work really shows. I love the flow. Keep writting and you will go far!

Real good, I loved it deep, true and perfectly writen, I wanna read more of this kind.

Yeah, omg this is something i can really connect with because I have/am in this situation....but looser now.....i Like it, so swiftly and gently written so easily understood, like the innocence of a child..

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No kidding. i could tell you worked very hard on that poem. its great.

I really like this poem. I could feel the emotion. you did a really good job at capturing that certain emotion