by Marc Ortiz Jun 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Walking alone in this dark, barren land |
by Vanessa
Quite moving, beautifully written, astounding images painted in my mind, from reading this, it spoke to my soul, this has to be my favorite. YOur word choice was amazing, and the vocab brillant, keep it up 5/5 |
by Michelle18
Oh my gosh ...wow...this is so so sad...the ending really shocked me... |
by sara
WOW! I really like it 5/5 |
Good lesson all in all. I tried telling some people that they should be thankful for what they have. The poem itself could improve. The ending was just a bit too abrupt |
by Gem
Oh wow.. this piece really made me think.. |